i like this probably cos of the match of colour and lines. Dont be afraid to crit? Umm the thing that stands out to me is the flat (or close to) colouring of her boobs. I dunno
or maybe its the lines, you have nice coloured lines with variation for the neck, even jawline, but an almost seemingly solid one for the chest.
But this could all be me and my shortsightedness.
Im not sure if its in the style, but extreme highlights?
i tried but i think if u invert it looks a little more clear, copy and paste it into a program then invert it might come out more noticable... o_O do u really think i did too much highlights i mean i kno i sucked at parts in the hair but i'm preety sure i did shadowing on her chest...
T_T forgive me!!!!!! i hav issues with colors and brushing....cuz sometimes i'll put stuff on the wrong layer and start spazzin and having to restart but thank u! ^_^
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or maybe its the lines, you have nice coloured lines with variation for the neck, even jawline, but an almost seemingly solid one for the chest.
But this could all be me and my shortsightedness.
Im not sure if its in the style, but extreme highlights?
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The only thing that I'm iffy about is the cheek. The brush seems a tad obvious...
Otherwise I love it. You chose some of my favorite colors.
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I'm just offering some criticism, that's all!
It take time too improve
I don't even know if I can color.
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